A walk in the sunset
Down the beach
Holding hands
No words spoken
None needed
A look tells all
Their love so deep
As the sunset fades
And darkness falls
Their love will conquer all
A contest entry
- OPTIONS!!! For ages 14 and up only!!! by Whispering Winds.
550 points, ended September 9, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Photo Inspired (Rain, Love, Nature, Beaches, The Moon, Sunsets, etc....) by Sally the Ragdoll.
600 points, ended September 23, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love by Madison Mary.
650 points, ended September 10, 2007, 59 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Aww, I like it: short, sweet, and to the point. ^^
Keep up the good work, and good luck in the contest!
-Sally -
This is a wonderful poem with alot of meaning in so little words. Thank you for entering my contest. You done a wonderful job on this.
Tammy
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Beautiful in its purity. This poem speaks of so much in so little. I love it.
-Nick
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Except for the word 'there' in line 10, which should be spelled 'their', I thought this was a well thought out and well flowing poem. I think you should change what I mentioned, though. Unless you were talking about a place, which I'm pretty sure you weren't.
Nicely done and keep on writing.
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