channeling water
among majesty flow still
against the stone splashed
In a list
A contest entry
- The Unusual Theme For Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended August 22, 2007, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - nature~haiku by misticmoonlite.
950 points, ended June 22, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lovely
imingery is awesome and the waters flow with spirit, thank you for this entry... good luck
Linda
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my ku. I'm glad you iked it. Haley27
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channeling water
among majesty flow still
against the stone splashed
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This write does describe a beautiful water garden well. -
Pretty haiku and such a pretty and serene image you've posted with this entry, Haley. I love the sense of sound through the quiet, as well as the scene you've written in these three short lines.
Thank you for this entry to the contest!
Jo
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Thank you
I'm glad u liked my ku and the wonderful critique and comments posted to my ku. I don't normally write ku's, but I thought I would give it another try.Haley27
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Nice haiku that lends itself well to meditation. I think haikus are perhaps one of the hardest poems to pen precisely because one is trying to express so much in so little. With this one, you succeed at getting me to envision water against a stone. Thank you for provoking my imagination
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amaza-zing
Wonderful poem. I love haiku, it's a beautiful form that keeps everything short and simple, but at the same time, it allows you to paint a very serene picture with so few words.
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Nice
A vision remembered and loved
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