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First Love

First love

You were the first one to make me feel that way
I forgot all my problems
My fears seemed to just disappear
After the first time, there was no way I was going to let you go!
The words just seemed to flow out of my mouth,
I had some of the best conversations with you.
You put a smile on my face not even death could erase.
My depression was gone with your presence,
and without you I could not move.
You were not cheap,
But my love was too strong
I did what ever it would take
You were the only one who would understand
What I had to do to get to you….
My love, my heaven….

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Wrote this one randomly one night, its about cocaine (heaven) i have a history of drug abuse and it was my first love

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  • princess2891
    March 10, 2008
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    I like it. It made me think of speed, my former drug of choice.


  • Innocence Gone
    December 29, 2007
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    cocaine huh?
    lol
    this made me think of my firstlove, my ex-boyfriend
    lol
    very nice!
    <3