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The Mother's Dream

She just can't get over him,
She wants them to be together again.
She says she wants the smile that she smiled,
the laugh that she laughed with him.
He was so good to her,
treated her like she desrved,
brought her home at night,
and made sure she was happy.
She says it's such a shame
that another boy came.
She just wished her daughter wanted the same....

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my first one up.,..give some adivce.
it's about how my mom wants me to be with my ex boyfriend, because we were so "in love"

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  • Innocence Gone
    December 29, 2007

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    blah
    moms dont often seem to see the change

    i rather like it actually
    im more into rhyme, as you'd been able to tell by mine

    i love the idea its getting across though
    <3