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A New Day

Hazy morning light
Reflecting on calm water
New chapter begins

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 22, 2008

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    Lovely traditional haiku you have penned here - wonderful change in that last line - all fits together so wonderfully. Nice gold trophy winner!
    Congratulations.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 1, 2008

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    I am looking forward to a better year, or at least hoping for a better one.
    As a new chapter begins another one closes... I hope so. It's nice to think though isn't it.


  • Pollycheck
    December 7, 2007

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    Hazy morning light
    Reflecting on calm water
    New chapter begins

    Thank you for entering my contest. This is a very well written haiku and I really like the aha moment in the third line.


  • liquidmindforever
    October 11, 2007
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    Thank you for entering Senryu & Haiku contest
    Very nice.
    lovelightpeace


  • Olivias Violin
    August 15, 2007
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    Very Good

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