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Insomnia Blues . . . Again






Amalgamating pages
    of soon to be published poems,
    I grow tired —
But I am unable to sleep,
    so I count the raindrops
    hitting the window.














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  • Danna Hobart
    September 2, 2007
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    Nice job. You said a lot with so few words. Thanks for entering.

  • Rowan gold member
    August 15, 2007

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    you're lucky..my poems are puddles
    waiting to be raindrops..lol.

    I loved this, for the endless frustration can sound
    like rain. You are a talented man.


  • MuddyKing
    August 15, 2007

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    excellent...and this seems to happen so often
    gave me a big smile and I needed that today
    peace Muddy