My passion for you controls my whole being
I love you more than I love this life
taken from my heart all my comfort is fleeing
my passion for you controls my whole being
the want for you in my life are you not seeing
if I must I will wait to be your wife
my passion for you controls my whole being
I love you more than I love this life
Here before you now I kneel as your bride
leave me not forever without peace
of your love I will not be denied
here before you now I kneel as your bride
proudly I will carry your pride
love in my heart I will never release
here before you now I kneel as your bride
leave me not forever without peace
The want for you in my life are you not seeing
if I must I will wait to be your wife
my passion for you controls my whole being
the want for you in my life are you not seeing
pain and suffering in my heart I am freeing
love will heal the wounds caused by strife
the want for you in my life are you not seeing
if I must I will wait to be your wife
Author notes
picture inspired contest
prompt option 2 Title "Wait"
In a list
A contest entry
- Maiden.........(not a quickie) by poet2angels.
575 points, ended August 20, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this very sweet, thanks so much for entering and good luck!
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Such a beautiful form the triolet is and you have done it justice with this lovely poem...A form so fitting for this beautiful pic!
Great job
Lynda
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Wow,
What a wonderfully penned piece here my new friend.. A good job given the picture prompt..I see it gave you much inspiration..Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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