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Transfixed

Tears unseen and cries unheard.
Facial expression removed-
    to reflect the gray areas of life.

I may not have a soul-
for I am a soul,
                          but my soul's body
                          will remain transfixed
                          and be part of this circle.

Only a handful of eyes-
can see my existance
and countless skins
can feel my presence.

I will always travel
in every breath,
in every particle,
as a soul of life.

[Body and soul will always be vulnerable]

Adrift in the light of life
As a soul, travelling afar-
                                            endlessly.

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Written August 15, 2007

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 16, 2007

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    Adrift in the light of life
    As a soul, travelling afar-
    endlessly.



    The notes of the intriguing stepstouching the gist of
    the prompt can be sen here very well..thanks for the beautiful entry in my contest..