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Fireworks

Like feathers drifting through the sky,
And lily's opening up.
Shooting like flowers as they die,
A spinning, dying cup.

A bloom of colours red and green,
Purple with silver leaves,
Shooting, spinning, colours are seen,
A fiery line it weaves.

Bursting through the blanket of night,
The golden rockets swish,
Petals fall in red and pure white,
A gardeners secret wish.

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  • Olivias Violin
    August 15, 2007
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    I like your originality. I haven't read any poems about fireworks before.

  • knoxville101
    August 15, 2007
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    :)

    Thats really nice!