Bulb caskette hidden-
in your subliminal room.
Incarcerated innocence-
appear in your tarnished,
broken body. With broken dreams.
[Inside-
its transluscence,
reveals my heir.]
Sleep, my child.
Sleep.
Author notes
Written August 15, 2007
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Comments
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And again you represented some great vocabulary in here, with beautiful imagery as well.
Thanks for yet another entry!
Leander -
Beautiful take on the prompt with a wonderful grasp on language. You've chosen words that not only sound lovely but look good too. Thank you
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