It'll Stop Bleeding, Won't it?
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I once said something simular, and it did eventually, humans are not ment to go through windows, for a one liner you struck it well, words that are thought sometimes said, and realistic.
If I tried a one liner I'd prob mess it up and get the kick, lol, nice choice of words.
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Says 22 lines and you get only 1 line of magnificence! I enjoyed this piece a lot... I don't think I would ever dare writing a one liner, but you did and you took it by the throat and directed it where to go!!! You told that one line to do what you wanted it to or you'd make it longer!!!
Nicely done and keep on writing! -
What a magnificent one liner, Raven! I truly enjoyed this and am going to read more of your stuff right now!
Keep up the damn good work! -
I love it! how simply profound!
It's good to read you again
Always impressed ~Pastel
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Do I really wanna know what this is about sis? Ahhh maybe not. a rather intriguing poem here it is. BIG
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As long as I'm here to lick your wounds, it will. And as long as my ghost is here to scare the shit out of you and stop your heart therefore stopping your blood flow, it will.
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yes
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