every
Night I think of
our togetherness in
love unprecedented in your
Embrace!
In moon
I perceive your soft
shining cheeks I adore,
My lips caressing in passion
Strong!
Rising
Waves of sea
Appear to me as
Exciting desire we two share
Ever!
Beauty
Unmatching and
unique you possess does
Make me breathless and think of you,
My love!
Author notes
Thoughts fill the gap created by physical seperation and togetherness continues ever in love!
Please tell me what you think
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This is absolutely beautiful and has such tender, loving words. Well done for this wonderful write. I really enjoyed how you put in a word at the end of each stanza. It has made it sound so powerful and passionate.
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Love is all we ever need. Distance cannot change the truest hearts. You poem embraces those feeling very well my friend. Ah...isn't love grand? A soothing work here poet that chases love throughout the cosmos. Excellent!
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Dear CG, A very beautiful poem you have written.
Very tender words of love.
I have missed commenting on your poems so I have a lot to read.
Your friend.
Joan
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oh this is sweet
every woman wants to be loved like this and thought of like this -
Breathless with beauty your words are soft and caressing...two souls become one mind yet so different and unique Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful mind
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Truly marvelous. Those who are physically close but do not share a mutual thought of love cannot imagine the depths of love shared by two who embrace one thought.
Terrific write.
Thank you.
Marianne
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