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What is this I feel

What is this I'm beginning to feel,
Thoughts in my mind turn on the wheel.
As I wake I smile thinking of you,
What is a girl like me to do.

We flirt with each other for a bit of fun,
This connection cannot now be undone.
Just seeing you brightens my day,
You make me laugh with the silly things you say.

This ain't love, that much I know,
But just thinking of you makes me glow.
If not love then what is this,
I wonder will we ever kiss.......

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  • hey charlie
    January 15, 2008

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    I don't want to be harsh but I'm sure you don't want me to lie to your face either. It seems very teeny-bopper to me. Something tells me that you didn't give your all when you wrote this. You have potential, so use it.Thanks for entering.