Diary of Insanity
shivering in malice,
for myself?
what i've become
or have let someone else,
make me?
is this real? am i lost?
emotions, like salad being tossed.
how much love? how much hate?
how much pain?
should i show?
distortion is all i can see,
but is just inside
the heart and soul of me?
what is perception?
is it your view too?
oh, i am alone.
Author notes
ok...whew! am finally here... you know... last time i checked i wasn't a blonde! DUH!...LOL * * well please tell me this made it...thanks Brother K for putting up with a vacuum head like me... desi(shzoosyq)
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A contest entry
- For those on favs list ONLY by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
875 points, ended September 4, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks Brother K for the honorable mention...made my day
...peace and harmony... Desi... thanks again!
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Wow, what wonderful emotions and imagery!! Just amazing Good luck in the contest
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distortion is all i can see,
but is just inside
the heart and soul of me?
I loved this line, Desi. It seems you have captured what I tried to do with that same write....get inside the mind of insanity. Brilliant! Thank you for entering and good luck.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
Interesting is the only word that comes to mind. Are you really alone. No no one in this world is truly alone. Though so many feel trapped by themselves so continue to seal themselves away so that no one can see the truth behind the mask that we all are afraid. I hope that it makes it for you and I beleive that it will for the dreamer is nothing more then a writer and insanity is nothing more than an answer to sanity. My perception is that life isnt so simple for you and that maybe you wish you lived a different life.Or maybe not.
~Dragonia~ -
Oh this is good and a real life diary for me I've been here in this write before ~ I like the form used adds to the read grandstand imagery good to see you again...
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