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Keep my casket closed.

Did you really think it would turn out this way.
Nothing but regret && pain.
Sharpened words wielded like weapons.
Everything you've said has been painfully true.
&& that's ok, but everything about me is wrong.
A simple situation, attraction gone awry.
Turned into such a situation.
I feel guilt, though i know I've done no wrong.
How did it turn out like this.
A promise of happiness.
Broken down into a torturous pain.
How did it get this far.
Something so trivial.
Becoming an all out war.
Of jealousy && spite.
All I wanted was love.
All you wanted was what you couldn't have.
So if it wasn't yours.
It wasn't anyone else's either.
In the end neither of us got what we wanted.
We only got pain && anger.
&& who on earth wants to live with that.

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  • forbidden-colour
    August 22, 2007
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    Sad, powerful thoughts hun.
    Great write [:

    Thank you for entering doll.x.


  • whiterabbit.
    August 19, 2007

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    aw, I really like this and the emotions here sweetie. I feel like I can really relate to this. You have a lot of talent and I really enjoy your work. This is so sad but beautifully written.