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Sonnet on the Wall

She sits quite stylishly on the wall;
Streamlined figure, well manicured fingers;
Her stature is neither short nor tall;
Her mild perfume on my nostrils lingers.

Her voice is mellifluous to my ears;
Her garments are simple yet elegant.
On her neck a resplendent chain she wears
With a crown etched on the pendant.

I draw close and she leaps on me grandly:
A grip on my intellect and emotion.
She floors me with the beauty of a lily
With her loads of sublime intention.

I'm confronted with a sonnet on the wall
And sprawlingly headily in love I fall.

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    August 31, 2007

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    Wow, this is such a powerful write and so full of love. You have really written something great here with a great deal of depth.


  • ennovy silver member
    August 15, 2007
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    Wonderful Write

    What a beautiful sonnet I just adored it..Thanks for entering my contest...novy


  • Kiran silver member
    August 15, 2007
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    This is a beautiful sonnet which flows smoothly. Elegantly written with a tenderness and warmth.