Why did you leave him?
Have you always known about his lies?
How come you only left him now?
Did you believe him before?
Did you try to believe him before?
Did you love him?
Do you think he meant it when he said "I love you"?
Why don't you?
Do you think he meant it when he called you earlier and said "I miss you"?
Why did you say the same to him?
Do you?
Liar.
Author notes
Lies. My prompt was lies. The title is a Filipino word meaning "liar".
penciledlives
A contest entry
- The Random Rounds - Round 6 by Frodofan.
486 points, ended August 26, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Sinungaling by penciledlives
Title - 7
Style - 5
Form - 5
Spelling - 10
Captivating - 5
Originality - 4
Reaction - 5
Rules - 10
Makes sense - 6
Enjoyable - 5
Total - 62
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Sinungaling by penciledlives
Title - 7
Style - 6
Form - 6
Spelling - 10
Captivating - 5
Originality - 4
Reaction - 5
Rules - 10
Makes sense - 7
Enjoyable - 5
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This was a difficult round. It challenged the contestants and will show which of you are daring and what you write when you're put on the spot. I think that, for this kind of round, you really didn't give me your best. Did you give yourself the prompt?
Title - 10
Style - 4
Form - 4
Spelling - 10
Captivating - 3
Originality - 2
Reaction - 4
Rules - 10*
Makes sense - 10
Enjoyable - 4
total: 61
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Yes, I did. I had no idea what to write, so I drew my inspiration from one of the short stories that I was given in class. It was entitled "Short Answer", and is made up of only questions.
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