beguiling
divine Luna
seducing Zeus,
her moonlit
captivating stare,
tempting his
deistic splendor,
throbbing with desire;
discounting ignorant Hera,
satisfying sensual surrender,
graceful and supple,
delicate connection
gently pulsating
lustful indulgence
fiery infatuation
passions soaring
vibrant energy,
peaking intensity,
night climaxing
waves of magic
flooding the
virgin goddess
devious ecstasy,
emotions
displayed
throughout
the night sky,
the mark of
beautiful betrayel
A contest entry
- Sensuality on the RISE! (18 or older) by luckynsincere.
1050 points, ended August 24, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 2008, 182 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I honestly don't think this write could be said any differently ~ and pull off the work which you did ~ I've been with the AP for about 8 to 9 months (I think) ~ So, I'm still a novice regarding so much ~
When I first started I hated "Free writers" I was like what is the skill in that? As, I started to read more ~ and learn more ~ I've really changed my opinion of what skills and abilities a "Free verse writer" uses in the combination of words and sentences.
This poem would be one of the poems I would say is a perfect example of how creative a "Free verse" poet/ess can be... Well done~ I did enjoy the piece.
Thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ Good luck to you
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Your wording is most interesting!! I found this enticing and wonderfully mysterious! Well done
I loved the way you allowed your words to fall... freefalling
It made it even more beautiful in my very own opinion !!
Good luck!
Mel
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