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Eternally bound by love .

Your friends party and laugh it up now.
You think and smile as you remember to yourself.
Remembering the days when you did the same.
Now your heart is bound by love.
This makes you smile for you know shes the one.
Gone are the days when you partied with friends.
From this day on you party with one.
You share each others thoughts, pain and fear.
In sickness and in health you are bound for an eternity.
You exchange some words in front of friends and family.
Place a ring upon her finger and seal it with a kiss.
This is the first day of the rest of your life with -
The one you love.
This is your wedding day.

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  • DarkMorbidVampyress
    September 7, 2007
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    This my dear friend is beautiful. That is how I feel about my fiance' Spencer

  • ScarletLetter
    August 15, 2007

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    I find myself at a loss of speech.
    Your poetry is different than most,
    and that's why I love it so much.
    This particular write hit home with me though.
    See,
    That day won't be long now.

    Great write

    Much love and prayer
    ~*Jess*~


  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 15, 2007

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    This poem is very sweet.
    I hope my life turns out as bright as this.
    Very strong meaning.
    I liked how you turned the beginning from remembering the good ol' days, to something more special and respectful.
    Very well done.


    xx.

  • blueyez
    August 15, 2007
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    very sweet!


  • BellaDonna DeMcHowl
    August 15, 2007
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    wow this is beautiful.
    PAtt
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