You're on your way
to her tangerine-scented skin
sweet marshmallow kisses
and melted marmalade eyes-
The rush of the cabs
through the rain
a kaleidoscope
of chemical color-
You're on your way.
Author notes
silverbutterflies23
tangerine, marshmallow, marmalade, cabs, rain, kaliedoscope, chemical
A contest entry
- Dripping Imagery [Must read the rules] by She Stole My Voice.
300 points, ended August 26, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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yup, full of imagery as asked for. i just love poems like this, not only imagery but i can almost taste this
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Woo.
Love it.
I love the
'sweet marshmallow kisses'
line.
♥
Thank you for entering!
~Princess of Shadows~
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