I think my Dad's gone crazy!!
He ignores me and thinks I'm another
He doesn't want to see me
I try to show you
But all you do is push me down
My Dad's gone crazy!!
What kind of father didn't want his child
And then says he loves you?
You tend to not believe him
All he does is email to tell you
That he's leaving in a month
No plans, No ideas
Nothing
I may never see him again
What if I wanted to say good bye
This is not how it's supposed to be
My Dad's gone crazy!!!
Author notes
I, as you can tell, used the song My Dad's Gone Crazy
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550 points, ended August 29, 2007, 7 entries
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wow
this write kinda gives me the image of spinning around on a nonstop carnival ride -_- ok.. i dont know if thats the route you were going for.. lol.. but its the image i get when i read this.
i can totally relate to this write.. its very sad if its a personal experience...
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This is great though I wish it were longer.
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hehe this eminem song is so good!
nice re-write...*sigh* i wish i could re-write something as good as this....
well yah good luck in the contest
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Ah.. an Eminem fan, I see.
Interesting write.
I actually liked that song of his. Heh.
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I love how your emotion sprinkled all over this amazing piece. I've got to say this is one of the few nights I found so many people and so many poems that relate to me on the same situation. You really have a way with words. If you ever need to talk Im here for you trust me I understand where your coming from. Keep Penning!
Much Love,
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Thank you so much. That's such a wonderful compliment. I thank you sooo much. You've made my day. And thank you for the offer. It's really great to know that someone else knows how you feel. I might take you up on it someday.
Again, thank you
~~MeRI~~
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