Oh God
I am stagnating for you here while gazing down
rummaging for you miserably , however
I don't locate you there ,though I discover my life force there
I comprehend that you incarnate up in the sky
If I stay here glimpsing up to the sky
my life force is vanished from my eyes
when I glance to my life force down onto the ground
you disappear from my eyes
faltering my fascination of life force with an apprehension
that without your concessions no one can survive
so now please let me know that
what can be the appropriate configuration of mine when
I can behold you and my life force synchronously
Oh God...
Author notes
In our life we live in two methods. One method is to live in our own style forgetting the fear of God..And do whatever is possible in our life and its materialistic force even to live the life of a sinner and second method is to live a life with a fear of God, restricting ourselves by the values made by this nature to live in a moralistic way. It is very difficult to live our life combining both methods. One has to live one method to achieve other. This dilemma is stated in the prayer.
A contest entry
- PIF: Synchronicity by islekine.
570 points, ended October 29, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If God knew what I knew.... by walkingstick98.
450 points, ended April 28, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very good message you have hear so many people are torn with this decision everyday and your poem here states that very well. Good job and good luck in the contest
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wow this is truth
i think this same way
i think this poem is one of my favorites -
Awesome write...I constantly feel the pull in both directions...Do you think it has anything to do with me being a gemini?...leaf
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...your words here are so very honest and heartfelt...you give me hope by this write...life is a journey and a challenge...we grow in capacity to adapt our life to HIS dictates as we live our life here under our own actions , perhaps not as quickly as we would like, but we do grow...excellent writing...Peace, Rhonda
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