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Can you still feel?

Feeling Trapped?
Like the world you use to know is closing in on you.

Feeling crowded?
Like all of sudden you have no space to breathe.

Feeling pain?
Like your being stabbed in the heart with an object not even sharp enough to cut.

Feeling hurt?
Like everything you thought you knew ended up adding a new hole to your heart.

Feeling lonely?
Like being in a lake of tears but no eyes to cry them.

Feeling embarrassed?
Like your life is on tablet that everyone reads on your forehead.

Feeling invisble?
Like someone can just see right through you and not even hear you breathing.

Feeling tired?
Like your on a treadmill running to catch the illusion you think is suppose be yours but you run out of energy before you reach the next mile.

Feeling dead?
Like the whole world is crashing down on you causing you to fall from this tall building but when you reach the bottom your still standing.

If your feeling trapped, crowded, pain, hurt, lonely, embarrassed, invisible, tired, or even dead dont pity yourself your one of the few that get to feel without using bloody illusions.

Author notes

Ap. The ultimate question. Can you still feel? I was inspired to write this poem by a poet on Ap. Her name is dieing an pain. She's AWESOME and yall should check her out!

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Comments

  • fire angle is alive
    March 9, 2008

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    omg i realy like your writting girl but aye you should really write more an come on line more too kk
    love ya crissy


  • ckwriter69
    August 18, 2007

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    Good descriptions on feelings, I liked your thoughts and emotional messages. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.