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Revolver

Shes Like a loaded gun -Dangerous-

She sits on the edge of the bed with her head in her hands staring at the carpet

Tears falling

Rage  raising inside of her

she raised from the bed

she looked at the revolver laying on the bed

she picked it up

she could feel the cold steel

she raised it

and pressed it hardly against her head

 

and pulled the trigger.

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