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Fingerprints lingered upon the sands of yesterday;
cradling the infant, a harbored moon and languid trench,
insecurity skimmed her mind like a water serpent.

Ragged nails, bit to the quick;
an inch long, scraped at her face.
  “I don’t hate her, I just hate pretty.”

And while scratching she found the cure for faith.
Onychomancy squishing in between her toes,
holding injection sites for healthier days, for a higher
drug rate.

**

With water on the chessboard,
came a knight to kill the queen;
and there’s nothing she can say,
though she said to me

in secrecy:
   


    "We’re all messed up now ‘n days, girl.
    It's just in the way you handle your mistakes."

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  • ea silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    This is just simply another stunning poem from you and I am not at all surprised to see it garnered the gold. Good for you and good for nothinghere, too.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    first off congradulations on the gold
    this poem is great and well worth that trophy

    Riftkin


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    Awesome take on the picture. Great writing. Very original. Congratulations on winning the Gold!

    Jeannie


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    Wow, I am sitting here in awe of this piece, I have sad here for quite a while reading this piece over and over, welcome to the finalists

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck

    Karen


  • ellipsist
    August 15, 2007

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    incredible take on the picture

    I love the places this piece took me... wonderful use of vocabulary throughout...

    this piece is amazing... I have read it and re-read it and EACH time it gives me goose bumps...

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