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Ain't No Sunshine

The clouds rolled in,
as you rolled away,
turning the sky,
and my heart,
dark,

where once there was sun.

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I miss you, Baby!!!

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  • blanketstatement
    December 2, 2007
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    Hey there, guess who's back Don't know if you're there or not, but if you are...hey, you've got a review.

    At any rate, I like that phrase 'sweet write'--it is very sweet, and I like all the weather imagery--sadly, I guess love is changable like the weather as well. At any rate, I hope things turn out better for you .


  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 14, 2007

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    Awww.. I can feel the pain in this one.
    It's a sweet write, deary.
    I like how you used the storm as a metaphor.
    Beautiful. :]


    xx.