Rain on me,
make me clean,
rain on me,
give me nothing on which to lean.
Rain on me,
when i am weak,
rain on me,
get me to my peak.
Rain on me,
make me strong,
rain on me,
this won't last long.
Rain on me,
i'm gone,
rain on me,
and carry on.
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I will stand alone in the rain.
Written September 12th, 2003
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aww, i will stand in the rain with you!!! i like singing in the rain, it is fun. anyway, great write. wonderful rhyming.
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ok this one is really soothing compared to uncle sam...i thought it was nice tho, seeya heather
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Ah, this was very well done. I like the repitition and it flowed very well
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hey brandon this is really great but you needent stand in the rain alone! theres always someone around for ya dont worry.
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thats just spiffy.
it flwos really well. its a greta write
good job
me
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