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Bleak Abandonment


Beyond the darkness,
In a sea of troubled minds
We (grasping for air) search.

Yet what is found leaves us
wishing for death.
we lose ourself in the waves
of heaven and life,

Death                   
 
    and
                     
      Nothingness
   
It begins to tidal.

The thought rushing
To the mind
Grows  g  r ad ually
And spires our curiosity to swim

But, the water grows thicker
Drowning us even more.
Yet, obsession, though only an instant long,
Pulls us, draws us closer to the eye of the storm
As the waves crash around
And finally…we learn thoughts
That never touched so
deeply

Thoughts      so      empty
That the mind
n
u
m
b
s

nothingness

numbs
the
mind

feeling

            is all that remains

searching for ourself we have found what emptiness is,
what is left between the instants of thought and feeling
what is between the moments of drowning and death…
for death is an illusion and nothingness … its reality

The waves begin to hit and the tidal crashes down
But we are already numb and drowned

This

Is

Nothing(ness)


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