Bound in leather upon the floor
One stroke to tease, there will be more.
Black lace in candle's silhouette
Stroke number two, getting wet.
Feathered tickles upon your skin
Third stroke comes with my tongue, my friend.
Number four, I hear you sighing.
And soon, you'll find, I will be riding.
To bounce upon your cock so stiff,
count them love, this is the fifth.
Six brings groping to your balls,
screams echo off surrounding walls.
You say you want to go to heaven,
here comes stroke number seven.
Getting close, the ride, it's great.
Quivering with stroke number eight.
The ninth will show you Eden's door,
hold it now, there is one more.
I command you cum on ten,
and then I'll start, all over again!
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A contest entry
- HOW MANY STROKES WILL IT TAKE. (for WOMEN over 18 ONLY) by Swtpoetryman.
900 points, ended August 17, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Oh my now you do give this such details. Sounds like the voice of experience. Really done great.
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rofl! this is fabulous hun! muahahahaha! i cant think of a better entry for that contest! how perfect.
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17 views and only i comment?
I LOVED IT and if you ask me there should have been more comments to this sensual piece with all of the people who peeked at it! LOL!!! It took me more than ten strokes, Baby - to cummmmmmmm while reading this but cummmmmmmm I TRULY did, indeed - and I THANK YOU for it. And after the contest is over - I'll read it once again and to use the perfect ending to this piece
and then I'll start, all over again!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
Here cum three of the people who saw it who played while reading it but were too shy to say so!
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Very sensual.
I like how you number and rhymed it. Very original.
I see that you've entered this into a contest.. good luck, my dear.
xx.
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