whispered words
of poisoned breath.
melt away
till there's nothing left.
it eats at you
from the inside out.
hit a dead end.
take a different route.
tap on a window.
knock on his door.
scream until
your lungs grow sore.
correct yourself
when you've done nothing wrong.
tell yourself
that you're not right
you've been incorrect all along.
break something,
and he'll make you pay.
you wonder if there's anything left
that he can take away.
a dying butterfly
on a blackened rose...
if there is a light in the dark,
it never shows.
a field of broken glass.
a 2 leaf clover.
you hope with all your heart
that it will soon be over.
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i really like this poem its dark, but innocent. it comes from a pure heart you know? you dont want to but you have to , in order to get out
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aw thanks
=D you're comments mean alot <3
<3
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a beautiful and powerful poem.
about... an abusive relationship? if it is, i'm glad you let something horrible help create something beautiful. keep up the good work -
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yes, it is ..
thank you so much for your comment
it really means a lot to me
-Rayne
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this is a powerfull poem..it sounds to me to be a poem about an abusive relationship.you did an amazing job keep it up
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ha.. yup. it is bout that ^^ nice job.
(and thanks ^^)
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wow
this write is deep... but so sad... I am sorry you feel this way no one deserves to feel like that ever... I feel so bad for you and I hope that you dont always feel this way. keep up the amazing writing, it was just breathtaking.
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thanks it means alot =]
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awesome. your great at making poems flow just amazingly. also yet again great rhyme and imagery. nice write.
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thank yous! -huggles again- (>.<)
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i likey this poem but dude u need to use spell check...u spelt field wrong...u put feild...thats in the last stanza...1st line...luv yoos!!
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