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What Is This?

It is not love they say ....
so why do I feel this way?

This is so unusual for me!
but I can't help but feel strongly.

When you're gone, I'm in two,
just can't stand, to be without you.

I cling to each moment we're together
I'd like to be yours, forever.

Won't deny, these feelings are true,
I'm no one when I'm not with you!

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come on , I know you feel this way too ;P

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  • phsycoawesomeness
    August 16, 2007
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    great job


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    Awe, wow, such a deep piece, lrical almost in feelings, the way it just about screams off the page, straight into a whisper..Thanks for sharing, very deep, please pen on poet.


    Timothy aka poeticweaver


    • LonesomeDove09
      August 14, 2007
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      thankyou. I tried to embody my emotions into it without making it sound lustful.