These dreams tease me in their twinge of memories
Like a thin cloth, sodden, as it drips upon the wire
Oh the colors of vague like of two tired tears
As if I am being held by what quiets my tedium
Memories of us making love in our sensual kisses
That comes as if an assistant to my loneliness
Like a sweet taste to my mind but not my heart
For the mind doesn’t see it the way my heart does
The ambiance of a cup of hot tea within ones palm
Upon my willow heart floats the elegant face of him
Like a rose, I felt its kisses upon my nose
The beautiful elements of him is what makes it true
Our sunflower days in which we churned upon
That crippled above me and I not knowing
That began a garden, my heart to his heart
Though love took him from my presence
A hand waves its efficents lover's touch upon me
Wings of soft silver swaying in blue summer light
Stained with pelt of roses was this bird
I thought reality was of that dream but foolish was I
That these pleasurable acquaintance with him
These wondrous kissing and whispering into his ears
and him whispering into mine, picking out each rose
Was that of a single dream that befell
Oh the sudden ache...
I want to forever come back within it
And tell him that I love him
Because now I have to feel as if he just left me
suddenly!!!
In a list
A contest entry
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650 points, ended September 17, 2007, 43 entries
Gold trophy winner
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awwwww.....
this is very sweet and filled with such pain and emotion. You really know how to write and make the emotions really stand out.
*hugs*
sorry if this is true and you're really hurting,
hope you're better
thanks for your entry
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this piece is very beautiful and so well worded. I like how when reading this piece I felt like in another universe somehow. It might sound crazy, but your words really flew away and left me here. I like how there's both pain and love in this. Very good!
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wow this was beautiful!! I really enjoyed reading this, it was such a great write! It had so much imagery it was really excellent! Thanks heaps for entering and good luck!
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Good piece.
I enjoyed reading this!
Thank you for entering
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WOOOOOW
This is really awsome, keep up the good work.
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This piece was so descriptive and held so much imagery that you floated to another place while reading it. A sence of calmness reigns your mind while speaking these words. I love the title and the piece that followed. Your effort shows in this piece. Keep writing because your sure amazing at it.
Much Love,
PlZdieFasterLove
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