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Oh Brother...

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Well, hello there A-bear
Dennis is my name
I see you need a family
And I could use the same

For the positions stated
I rate them con and pro
And feel I'd best be suited
If I became your Bro

Big brothers watch out for their sis
So troubles will not reign
If someone were to bother you
They might end up in pain

Please don't get me wrong
I am the friendly sort
I only would use violence
As a last resort

I could watch out for you
As any brother would
And see you're treated fairly
In this AP neighborhood 






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further information about me can be found at:

http://allpoetry.com/Haiku-bless-you

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  • piccola silver member
    August 17, 2007

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    This is great...I'd love a brother or two or three. I like the rhyme and the cuteness of the write. Thanks for the entry