Shall I step on your feet while we dance
as you lead me down the path to success
Can you help me up when I fall to failure
and wipe away my tears while I lay on your chest
When I have a bad day or break up with a boy
Can you be there to help me cope?
With all the love that I can give to you
Shall you return it to me with arms of hope?
Can You be a grandmother to me everyday
and treat me like a ruby red charm
Fill me up and shine me on with love
all that you need with a reach of your arm
HUGS
Author notes
I would like to be your grand daughter =]
A contest entry
- AP Family by piccola.
450 points, ended August 18, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful sentiments written here. thank you for this lovely entry. Any grandmother would be very proud.
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love it, it is a great trubute to your grandma, very emotional. you know what this poem did to me, it takes me back all the way to when my father used to teach my sisters how to dance.
great job, good luck.
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This is beautiful, it made me quite emotional. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
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