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Acrostic for Night Hope

W   ithout some threat of absence on us
A    ll, that presence of an hour would
N    ever rise so high to fall on
D    amocles, "Oh Damocles!" - your sharpened quill
A    hover from this poet's call.

I    mmortal words she carves in ink, to
S   tain a page of life for all to drink

E   nlightenment: to risk a walk on wisdom's ledge; to
V   enerate each moment found in dancing to that gentle
E   dge; to reach beyond the artful sky with
R   iches spun within her care. To hound each
Y   ear of silence in that higher air! For

N  ight retreats, as dawn meets day -
I   t always shall, for that is Wanda's way. She
G  reets so many travellers, so many weary
H  eartfelt moments wrapped so rare.
T   ucks them in with promises of light.
S   ends them off to dream away the feeble dust of night.

H  er primacy of kindness, our wealth to covet dear, 'til coffers
O  verflowing with her glow, do lightly sear us
P   ale beneath that brightest sun.
E   ndeared she is to us - our warmest AP mum.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Inspired by any of the endless Acrostics written by Night Hope (though not a patch on the lowest of hers ... but that is okay)

Oh, and not my AP mum ... but is one in spirit and also reality to many many many denizens of this vast realm.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    August 20, 2007

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    So many things to say about this wonderful poetess and mentor on this site. Liked the use of the acrostic in this case - worked well; easy to read and understand as well.


  • PageTurner
    August 19, 2007

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    Your acrostic of admiration and love for our Wanda is one of sheer beauty...

    "I mmortal words she carves in ink, to
    S tain a page of life for all to drink"

    You know her well, my Friend!
    ~ Nicholas


  • Heart Sutra
    August 19, 2007

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    Given Wanda's penchant and natural enjoyment of Acrostics....this is fantastic! You have done a great job honoring both the woman she is and her love for this form of poetry.


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 17, 2007

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    I know this acrostic poem comes from your heart - and how well you've written this wonderful tribute to one of the greatest poets here on AP. I can feel and see a spiritual connection here.. so well done.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Jaden silver member
    August 15, 2007

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    You get my non-counting vote with this one. I'm not a fan of Acrostics because they're just too tight and limiting for my taste. But this is the first one I've read that I've actually liked. Elegant writing. And it's a rhymer too which you pull off nicely.

    Thumbs up. Hope you win.


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 15, 2007

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    Oh what a lovely tribute to the Wander Woman ... She's a treasure for sure


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    August 14, 2007

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    this is really beautiful....
    i remember here from the site a long time ago before I left... she was always so nice and a voice of sensitivity within hard reason...

    just lovely


  • Cat gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    you've really captured the true wanda in this acrostic- so nice to find this here in our special tribute to wanda

    m


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    "I mmortal words she carves in ink, to
    S tain a page of life for all to drink

    E nlightenment: to risk a walk on wisdom's ledge; to
    V enerate each moment found in dancing to that gentle
    E dge; to reach beyond the artful sky with
    R iches spun within her care. To hound each
    Y ear of silence in that higher air!"

    I gotta disagree with ya, Sweetie; this is way better than ANY acrostic I've ever written. What a glorious penning this is, my Friend. What a lovely soul you are for writing it. I wrote a piece mentioning Damocles' sword a few months back, before we really started reading each other's work. There ARE Kindred Spirits among us, it seems. When I was led to AP's hallowed halls, I wished there had been a place like this when I was 14 & just starting to write. In the 3 years I've been here, I think my work has improved dramatically, just from the exposure to so much incredible talent. You're on that list, ya know. Thank you so much for your kindness & thoughtfulness in penning this wonderful piece. Good luck in the contest. Be well, Poet. Wanda


    • EvilKate
      August 14, 2007
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      Oh will you hush and accept your rightful reign already!

      • Night Hope gold member
        August 14, 2007
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        Actually, I DO have a reign, of sorts. My "literary daughterly unit thingy", Poet ILTL4eva7 (who brought me to AP), calls me "Queen Goof"; I'm still waitin' on the tiara, though.

        • EvilKate
          August 14, 2007

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          Oh - and I must add ... my inner-feminist is doing angst-ridden cartwheels at my last statement

          oops - I mean the one below this ... which was entered first

          • Night Hope gold member
            August 14, 2007
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            I hear ya. I'm a former tomboy myself; I grew up between two brothers. So how the Hell I wound up a romantic writer, who knows??? I figure I'm more of a humanist than a feminist; that way, the crown won't rankle quite so much.


        • EvilKate
          August 14, 2007
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          Cool. Maybe I can be a princess!??


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 14, 2007
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    This is perfect


  • misselaineous
    August 14, 2007
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    she will adore this I think


    • EvilKate
      August 14, 2007
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      I hope so ... felt the end was a little weak, compared to the start ... but, it's where the muse went

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