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Desire

       Surveying the scene you catch my eye

Passion demands and I comply

Gazing in awe, wanton desire

Object of affection, I must acquire.

 

Subtle rebuffs the attempts to reject

Doesn't have the desired effect.

How can you possibly refuse?

I am ready and willing to take the abuse.

 

Reveling in your resistance

Gaining approval has become my existence.

Finding you I finally lost me.

Chains are security; I don't want to be free.

 

Fighting nature in my contortions

Reason is lost in swirling emotions.

Surrender complete, embrace my fate.

With my own hands the cage I create.

 

Drifting down the river of lust

Too enthralled to experience disgust.

This will take me farther than I want to go

Depths of the sea, burning crust below.

 

Continuing headstrong and bent

Whooping gleefully for my explosive descent

No apprehension about the fall

Raucous laughing in this carnival.

 

Fact- this perilous ride will come to an end

Has never entered my world of pretend.

Defending the right to my impetuous slide

Crashing to the ground, praying I glide.

                               




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  • Marctheman
    August 14, 2007
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    this is a very deep poem, it has a lot of image, grat work and wellcome to the site.