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10 to 1 odds.

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I am a little strange
and I'm not what I appear,
but I'm loyal to a fault
and I really am sincere...
when I say I am just lonely
and a family's so nice,
I know it could all hang on
just a throwing of a dice,
So, if you care to risk it
and adopt a "colleen fair"
then I've lost a blessed fiver!
on a bet we could have shared...

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  • Old Fool
    August 28, 2007

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    Short, but o so sweet..
    I love this piece, full of promise, fun, joy..
    Very well captured
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    • cutiepie gold member
      August 28, 2007

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      Many thanks for your kindness It will be returned

  • piccola silver member
    August 14, 2007

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    This reads with a lovely little lilt. So what family member do you want to be? Daughter...grandaughter...?
    you've but to let me know