Energy is the creative life force that thrives internally and externally
Posturing thoughts collide with revolving kinetic substances
A substance of negative and positive electrons that create change.
Changes that moves at a pace that can and in certain forms can not become distinguishable
Expanding and contracting, it collides and repels.
Collisions of human interactions are constant and becomes known to those that truly know them selves
How is it that I have failed to acquaint my self with
Myself?
A millisecond of Possibilities and thoughts are perceived by the observer
Yet - Ones action can not be actionable unless it is observed
If ones awareness is not perceived, is an action taking place?
Are actions a reflection of reality or reflections of a perceived reality?
Elastic collisions continue as energy is revolved around our observed actions
Drawn from the universal database which is energy
No action is new and no past action is gone.
Our memories and current exploits circulate in the continuum time
Colliding with change, colliding with a constant force of energy
Energy emanating from negative and positive pulses that are more constant than
Life, love or death alone.
There Is no death because matter and energy never dies or dissipates.
There is always life because life evolves
It evolves, transforms and reanimates like our thoughts that stretch forth
into dimensions and millenniums that exist beyond our visual imagination
Inelastic changes exist as we evolve.
Embrace them
Expansion is freed when restrictions are released from
Your mind
Author notes
Ok, I've been reading Quatum physics, Deepak Copra and a few other subatomic spiirtual books and this came up. Yes weird but.........
In a list
A contest entry
- Elastic by Pamela A Lamppa.
4500 points, ended August 26, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TRANSFORMATION..IS IT HAPPENING TO YOU! by LadyLavender.
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Deep
This is some deep shit, and yet this is very true. energy is everything nothing can be anything without it. I level have you dwell into different with theme of quantam thoughts and energy. This is truly homie. I can see we think in the same wave lenght on this subject.
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Quite interesting...
Curious about your own transformation -
Goodness!
Oh I did enjoy this philosophical piece. A couple of grammatical things that need checking like:
Energy is created and forms from those that draws it from within
Might be better said:
Energy is created and forms from that which draws from within - or something to that effect. I tripped over that line a bit.
and this one: Changes that speeds up and slows down at a rate that is
Indefinable
Might be better said:
Changes that speed up and slow down at a rate that is undefinable. - or to that effect.
Take another look. PLENTY of time to polish before the judging and I will come back to look.
I always do.
I can see your reading has influenced this very mature write. A unique and very special entry to my contest. I love how different this is and it has touched me inside. I will ponder on this piece for quite some time. Thank you for this wonderful entry. ~Pamela
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Thanks so much Pam - I think my mind spilled out a little too fast. I will review it and make the appropriate changes. I felt a little off after I hit the submit button but glad i have a good friend like U to keep me on the straight and narrow. ~ see ya soon ~ mykey
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