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Faith's Name - HM

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when morning rises and dusts off webs of night,
she rises, like a flock of doves from the hayloft

releasing heartful of words, out into ether
that gathers them into sigh’s bouquet,
gives them to those who recognize
soulful sweet sighs

by night, she withdraws like swan
to smooth glass,
etching her signature to be traced
by hands who desire to touch
awe and inspiration’s Muse

gathering midnight meanings,
stroking edge of my loose lake of yearning
like hope in deepest night
and I am ecstatically aware that faith has a name

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I am honored and grateful to call Night Hope "My Friend".

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  • Heart Sutra
    August 19, 2007
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    Perfect Written like a true friend and from the heart of someone who knows her well.


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      August 24, 2007
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      I know some of her soul..and that is more than I knwo of some people I have known nd lived aroudn all my life. ty ty


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 16, 2007
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    Doves, sighs, swans, light, hope, faith, inspiration...you have it all here for Wanda. I know that you are a very special friend to her and know her so very well...and this poem shows it. Lovely poetry...the last stanza is wonderful. Thank you for sharing this piece of soul, Carol.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Cat gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    oh.. that final line is something amazing.. wonderful poetry for a wonderful friend- so glad you joined us in this celebration of wanda

    m


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      August 24, 2007
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      ty mary, for doign this for her and more... for embellishing on the spirit of real friendship we find here.


  • kaibab silver member
    August 14, 2007

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    And I am honored as wel...my prairie scribe is just a prat of us...she is already smiling I know at this lovely mirror of hope as essential element for eternal ability to carry on...


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    "by night, she withdraws like swan
    to smooth glass,
    etching her signature to be traced
    by hands who desire to touch
    awe and inspiration’s Muse"

    Dear Heart, you had to know I wept upon reading these beautiful words of yours. I am honored & grateful to call YOU my Friend, my Sister, my Comrade in Arms Gripping Pens. If you are aware that Faith has a name, then I am also aware that so does Grace. Thank you so much for your constant, loving support & for the wonder of reading your prolific words. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. Wanda


  • PageTurner
    August 14, 2007

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    From her Heart and Soul...

    You know the Lady well! A monumental tribute to one of AP's finest, from another equally stalwart contributor. You've filled this with your Heart & Soul. The Love, Admiration, Respect, Caring, and Camaraderie, all shine through! You two are surely Soul Sisters... a forever attachment! Wanda will be crying tears of joy after reading this...

    "releasing heartful of words, out into ether
    that gathers them into sigh’s bouquet,
    gives them to those who recognize
    soulful sweet sighs"

    Ya got me in tears {of joy}, too.

    Beyond Beautiful, My PenFriend.
    ~ Nicholas


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