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Whispers

Whispers
Breath in my ear
Comfortable lies you tell
Pretending that your words are true
Face so innocent, tongue so decietful
Wanting so badly to love you
Naive and blind as well
Speak my fears in
Whispers

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    Well done on a great piece, this form does look so much better when centred.... well done again

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck

    Karen