Have
always
wanted to
vacation in
scenic Hawaii
To surf on monstrous waves
To watch pretty girls hula
To gorge on a gorgeous luau
Now that I am in year ninety four
must hurry before I am out of time
Author notes
Prompt.Out Of Time.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF 10 by penman.
525 points, ended August 14, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie ~ Picture Prompt ~ or ~ by blondone.
525 points, ended August 15, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Quest ~ Prewrite Party 2 by Namita.
300 points, ended October 6, 2007, 95 entries
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390 points, ended December 23, 2007, 46 entries
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This is a very light hearted poem, and is a form I am not that familiar with, but I really like it a lot. This made me smile. Very nice poem! Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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Thank you for entering my contest
Lighthearted approach, nothing i can really say about this...
~ Norm -
Love this light etheree. You sticked to the form and still did well. Thank you.
Luv,
~Candy
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Cool write I love the imagery and the words flow with ease and the etheree is one of my favorite forms thanks for the entry
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Beautiful poem--don't forget to take your laptop to Hawaii and write more excellent poems like this one!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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