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My angel of darkness

My angel of darkness
Guiding me through the light
Protecting me from the day
Until safety comes at night

Special kind of inspiration
A friend thats out of sight
When my emotions start to stir
Angel of darkness helps me write

My angel of darkness
With me all the time
My angel of darkness
Inside my heart and mind



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  • Breaking The Girl
    November 17, 2007
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    Very nice. It's beautiful.


    • Deathletter
      November 17, 2007
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      Thankyou

      Thanks im glad you liked it one of my lighter pieces he he


  • Whispers of Hope
    August 17, 2007

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    wow I really enjoyed reading this poem sweet and simple yet it still has its depth!!
    ~Ocean~


  • SeansterMonster
    August 15, 2007
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    Odd

    different way of viewing the muse that aids you. I give it a 6/10, great job.


    • Deathletter
      August 27, 2007
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      Thankyou

      Im always inspired by the darker side of life so i guess my muse must be dark to if you believe in that sort of thing! Glad you liked it thanks for commenting.


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 14, 2007
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    well written and we are all lucky to be blessed with someone or an entity watching over usand giving us inspiration to share our writng espcially when at times we have reluctant fears of our muse. We share ourself in our daily life and honored to be guided throughout each moment good luck and many blessings xxx

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