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Insomnia(Hay(na)ku)

Insomnia
Sheep asleep
Me wide awake

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  • Carly Pop gold member
    September 2, 2007
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    Great!!!!!

    I agree with Danna - ditto that!


  • Danna Hobart
    September 2, 2007

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    Ha ha! This is brilliant! So much said in so few words. Great allusion to the counting sheep ritual.

  • SilentMind
    August 21, 2007

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    lol nice play on the sheep/bedtime association...well at least I think it was a play on that? The whole 'count sheep' thing?


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 14, 2007
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    LOL all day! Good luck in the contest!