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Sixth Sense

For those who have a sixth sense
One that none can comprehend
A tie between words and emotion
Bringing peace in a mood of commotion

For those who hear a poem sweet
Upon their tongue before pen meet
Who feel words stir within their heart
And must let them out and depart

For those who have another land
Within their grasp, in palm of hand
Who Come and go as they very well please

Living normal lives outwardly

 

For those who are unlike other men

Who hold a promise deep within

For those who live with secrecy

In six senses, for those like me.

Author notes

For Bob, who has an amazingly awesome name.

Wow, and that came out terribly horrid. Anyone offer a hand for correction?

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  • pen-inhand
    August 15, 2007

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    Kelly says this piece is thought provoking. Written very well. The flow is good and each line compliments the last. Bob says I had to read this twice and I think I got it the second time. So you beleive poets are different as well as I. It was very easy to read (even though twice I read it) I found your words strong and full of personal conviction as to your writing. Well done! Thank you for entering our contest and the best of luck to you, Kelly & Bob P.S. Bob says...thank you I'm rather fond of my name!


  • StrangerInThisWorld
    August 14, 2007
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    YEA and NAY

    Well I was about to commend you for this short but fulfilling piece, but then what is "suck-ish"? WHY are you saying these things....BACON!!
    *Goes to weep in a corner (NOT EMO CORNER CHIBI!) and then returns. AND THEN GOES TO WEEP AGain!*
    (Alright, so that was odd, but it was fun.)


    • Artemis Gem
      August 15, 2007
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      Yah; probably not the best word to use. I'm sorry SITW! *hugs*
      Why I said that...um, I'm not quite sure. Gomen nasai

      pegleg