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Fisherman

dark cloud covers sky
fisherman in deep ocean
eager to reach home

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Haiku, Nature

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    December 4, 2007

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    dark cloud covers sky
    fisherman in deep ocean
    eager to reach home

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. This haiku describes the hard life of the fisherman very well.

  • Virgoan
    September 16, 2007

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    This is a breeze as all haiku are. Nice write

    Thanks so much for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing fellow poet.

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 10, 2007
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    interesting poem here
    and one I think you had fun writing

    Riftkin


  • Swan song gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    There is such a fine line between haiku and senryu but there is a line. Haiku should have almost no human element in it at all. Senryu can and also can be humerous. I enjoyed this poem it is very good


  • azure85 gold member
    August 20, 2007

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    This is a lovely haiku, with more than one meaning. I really enjoy the images you have in this haiku, and the thoughts that flow throughout your lines, thank you so much.


  • maa gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    a haiku/senryu with a deep spiritual meaning ...
    wonderful ...


    maa

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