Whilst laying in my bed, alone, generally I find
With some imagination, I can make love to my mind
I think of you, and myself, I do tease
And I can do this, with considerable ease
You are dressed like an angel, and with a halo too
How could I possibly, not, want to make love to you
You`re body is gorgeous, it is the perfect ten
As soon as I`ve loved you, I need to do it again
Thinking of you darling, its not hard to fantasize
You are the perfect woman, I hope you`ve realised
I kiss and hug you, then take you in my arms
In my dreams darling, you are thrilled with my charms
Cupid looks down on us, shooting arrows everwhere
Our love making is awesome, near too much to bare
You send me to places, no one else could ever find
Making love to you sweetheart, is blowing my mind
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WOW
A stimmulating piece of work here, romanticly done in rhyme. wonderful feelings here in your description.well done my friend.
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you have a wicked sense of humor and a writing style i like very much, gonna do something rare, gonna read more of your stuff, lmao, great write too!
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Well I hope you
get some more enjoyment
from my poetry
and thank you for your kind
comments
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i love this..,! you can make love to your mind... such an excellent line! wish i had thought of it myself...;)
becca
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Yes give it a try
You will be glad you did
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Oh wow....very captivating.....
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"make love to my mind"
What a tactful, romatic way of putting it! This work manages to be sensual without being crass. My only correction would be that 'bare' should be spelt 'bear' in this context...or was it deliberate innuendo? Well done
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Woooooow..
You send me to places, no one else could ever find
Making love to you sweetheart, is blowing my mind
I love to read sensual poems like this one..this was great one...romantic and very elegant...thanks for sharing
Whispers
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This is fantastic...I love the cadence, rhyme, and the content...
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OoOoOooOhh!
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i see you like to have a lot
of fun with rhyme and erotica...
this was great to read.
lane
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Sometimes its more fun imagining a lover. great poem.
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This is gorgeous
'I can make love to my mind'
I love that line, brilliant stuff.
xXxPurexXx
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Clearly a poem of longing
I would guess that the dreams behind this are very fun. Feel like their could be a bit more original imagery, but it's a cute poem.
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Whilst laying in my bed, alone, generally I find
With some imagination, I can make love to my mind
I think of you and myself, I do tease
And I can do this with considerable ease
In my mind we lay together, in a bed of flowers
We never seem to tire and we make love for hours
Every thing is perfect, the sun is always shining
If there is a cloud it will have a silver lining
You are dressed like an angel and with a halo too
How could I possibly not, want to make love to you
Your body is gorgeous, it is the perfect ten
As soon as I’ve loved you I need to do it again
Thinking of you darling, its not hard to fantasize
You are the perfect woman, I hope you realize
I kiss and hug you, then take you in my arms
In my dreams darling you are thrilled with my charms
When it does darken, the place is full of moonlight
Sexy shadows you do cast, in your gown of silken white
Cupid looks down on us, shoots arrows everywhere
Our love making is awesome, nearly too much to bear
You send me to places were no one else could find
Making love to you sweetheart is blowing my mind
i made some corrections minor corrections the poem is 271 words if your willing get rid of 71 words of this piece and proof read it back to your self this poem has great potential and can pass if you work o it ~ jewels ~ -
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Please check the poem now,MY MIND IS BLOWN,is that better? sorry for too many words b4
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