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Angelic Love

Sharing the wine we've savaged of the blood of our equal veins
A deep friendship like this is unstoppable.
I, an angel,
You, a beautiful torn manequin
Darkness is so beautiful on you.

I note the fragile glance of fear in your eyes so full of smoke
What horror could you ever imagine?
My dear don't you know they could never silence us?

I know you are forbidden in His sanctuary,
It would bring a pain you could never endure
The incense and candles would burn your fragile skin.
We both know you are a beautiful fallen angel.

How cold is it in the world you were banned to?
Let my love melt the ice you have been sent to dwell in.
I will always be your friend.
For I will always have your back.

Author notes

Wine, Mannequin, Fear, Candle, Torn, Fragile, Incense, Smoke, Sanctuary, Endure, Deep, Fallen, Vein, Blood, Savage, Silence, Horror, Imagine

And photo number 7.

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  • Trial and Error
    September 1, 2007

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    I like this.
    I'm sorry it took so long for me to comment and to judge the contest, but thank you for entering and good luck!

    Kat


  • Kristen Corpse
    September 1, 2007
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    Lovely job on this. I like how you broke the stanzas and made it easier for the reader to follow. The flow of this is absolutely dashing and I like how it goes well with the picture. Thanks for entering. Keep up the good work and best of luck to you in the contest.

    Always and Forever,
    Aqua Tinted


  • ZestyDreams
    August 16, 2007

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    Well done. I cant write well if I try to write using certain words or from contest themes, I have to wait to be inspired or else the poem I write will be forced and majorly suck.

    This however was awesome, I was enjoying it immensely before even realizing it was from a word bank. My favorite part was describing this fallen individual as a " beautiful torn manequin
    Darkness is so beautiful on you."

    I love beauty when beauty is found in things that wouldn't normally be taken as being beautiful. Well done. =)

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.