No one makes me smile
Quite as much as you
No one makes me laugh
Quite as much as you
No one makes me blush
Quite as much as you
No one makes me think
Quite as much as you
No one makes me wrong
Quite as much as you
No one makes me cry
Quite as much as you
No one wipes away the tears
Quite as much as you
No one makes me feel
Quite the way you do
Author notes
I'm into repetition, so if you aren't, this was probably horrible for you. Sorry, to whomever it may concern.
Also, to those of you who actually know me and would be able to recognize me if they hit me with a car (so basically my community friends thatI know outside of AP), this poem is not what you may think. Just letting you know.
Please tell me what you think
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Cute.
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Great!
I love repitition....I think it adds a lot of emotion! Great job on this one...it's definitely one of your best. -
This is really good. I don't usually like repetition, but there's something about this poem I really like.
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AWWWW! This was sweet. Almost sounds like a song. Just wanted to stop by and show some support. Haven't visted you in a while. Oh and congratulations on being the top in your graduating class!
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...so then, who are you talking about???
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Nice.
I happen to like repetition, it adds structure to your poem if it's a free-verse such as this one so the piece doesn't seem all over the place. I think you did well with it, very nice.
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