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dream

to feel your skin
to taste your lips
  to feel your hands upon my hips

is like a dream
i'd like to scream
  but all of this is too serene

there is no where
but in your hair
  my fingertips would rather be

now hold me here
let's sleep my dear
  and in this dream you'll be with me

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  • Baisi
    January 22, 2008
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    I love this poem. It is so vivid and has really good imagery, plus I can relate.