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[ Holy Spirit, descend on me? ]

Holy Spirit, descend on me?
fill me with your honesty
be my compass
by my guide
"And so the truth shall set you free".

What lies ahead I cannot guess
I am not perfect, this I fess
I'm also weak
And yet I'm lost
wash me from this sinning mess.

Dear Madi, (my darling girl)
you will have to make decisions
people will push you and pull you
and you will have to answer with precision
two roads you will meet
and lives you will greet
so put a direction to your feet
choose wise punkin...never regret it


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idea jacked from MissyAnn and EmmyLou. sorry babes.

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  • emLeejo
    August 14, 2007

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    Dude. i say. Yours was by far way better than mine lmao..... i love the ending. it was too cute.. great job- you rock someones sox.. ok.. mine too. lol ttyl


  • MissyAnn
    August 14, 2007

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    I like this! i'm glad you jacked the idea it's fun and kind of opens you in a way. Short and sweet too!